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Digital Receipts/Digital Receipt #2

Digital Receipt #2

Posted by Harin D on

Harin Dharmasena 

Digital Receipt #2 

Reading, Listening, Viewing  

This week I spent approximately 1 hour going over the Backpacks vs briefcases by Laura Bollin Carroll and exploring the week number 2 assignment. For the documents, I understood each one and was able to figure out how to use rhetorical analysis and what it is. I spent time making sure that I understood everything in the document. I got how rhetorical analysis works and how we use it in our daily lives without having any recollection of it. While going through this week’s documents I was able to focus easily and easily understand what is required of me. I would say that I worked at my normal speed and work ethic and was able to clearly grasp this week’s workload.   

Writing  

This week our only writing assignment was to write a 300-word response after reading the backpacks vs briefcases. We were to take an instance we recalled using rhetorical analysis in our daily lives and tell it to the best of our ability. This took me about 20 to 30 minutes in total to do, as I was slowly figuring out what I could describe as rhetorical analysis. After finding a scenario I was able to describe and depict my response and complete the assignment. During this assignment, I worked at a normal speed trying to learn what the assignment was asking for. I do not believe that I struggled at this yet did my best.  

Providing & Responding to Feedback   

As this is the second week of assignments for this course, I have not really received any feedback yet but am hoping to get some feedback on how to better improve my digital receipts and how to further understand what I need to improve upon.  

Reflecting  

I learned how to submit my first writing assignment and grasped how this week’s task could benefit my upcoming assignments. I think I completed the writing assignment as best as I could, although I hope to learn with future assignments. I am slowly learning how to implement what I learned into my future assignments like the WLLN. I have a basic understanding of rhetorical analysis and am looking forward to receiving feedback on my assignment on how to better improve. 

Collaborating 

Thus, because it is the second week of class, and I have only had such a few times with my classmates, I have not had the chance to collaborate at all. I have introduced myself through the course site and through our week #1 and week #2 assignment. Other than that, I haven’t had much communication, I am looking forward to collaborating and working with my peers in the coming weeks.  

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Reflection #1, Digital Receipt #7

Posted by Ashraf Alam on

1) My audience was my classmates and my Professor. I wanted to use formal language for obvious reasons: it was an assignment; however, I wanted to target people who have also struggled with higher-level English courses (AP) to resonate with them more. People who have taken AP Literature or AP language: my Professor, classmates, and anyone reading this piece of work.


2) The first and foremost would be my writing skill and style, writing scientific papers for my high school career. It was challenging at first to develop another style and form that was not always in the active voice/pronouns like I or us in the paper. It was a learning curve for me. I developed analyzing skills, formatting skills, how to make my paper flow, and how to smoothly transition into ideas without slashing paragraphs. My grammar also developed; although I was somewhat proficient and confident in my grammar before, after the course, I understand the formalities of grammar and have a deeper understanding of literary composition.


3) Certain authors and their points of view stood out to me since that was the biggest learning curve, understanding to make their point of view “talk” while trying to prove your point of view/lens impacted my writing and understanding of the article or piece of writing. The context of the articles also mattered since an author may say something that supports your claim, but the statement itself wasn’t about your claim; it only unintentionally supports it. Some may then argue that the piece of evidence does not support your claim: I am assuming that they support my claim without any actual proof.

Assignments/WLLN/Digital Receipts/Digital Receipt #8

Digital Receipt #8/WLLN Final

Posted by Shahed Ahmed (He/Him) on

For Digital Receipt #8, I completed my WLLN final along with the media tools with it.

This is a picture of my first line of code along with the terminal returning the statement “Hello World”
This is an image of one of my most advanced projects I worked on. This is my driver class file for a mario game I was making.
This is a picture of the game that I created using Java.
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Project 1 Reflection (Digital Receipt 7)

Posted by Shahed Ahmed (He/Him) on

Writing the WLLN has allowed me to look back on my memories and reminisce about my wonderful past. I really enjoyed writing about my experiences in highschool with coding and how it reinforced my love for it. But looking back on my feedback I did see some faults with my writing and how they could have been worked upon. Even though I was writing about significant events in my life, I could have provided more experiences I had with computer science by providing my writing with more media so someone who doesn’t know anything about coding/computer science, can see what it was really about for me.

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Digital #6

Posted by Shaoqin Li (He/him) on

My question after reading the article “Bad Ideas About Writing” is if the article is saying grammar should not be as strict as some of the teachers are suggesting. Then what is the range of “proper grammar”, in other words, how should people know they are writing in proper grammar when they are writing?

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Reflection/Digital Receipt #7

Posted by Jia Yi Karen Li (She/Her) on

This assignment helped me understand and contextualize my experience in Germany from an educational viewpoint. It had been a while since I had written anything about my experiences with explaining the point of the text. It helped me also interpret stories to find the bigger meaning as I am used to writing/reading scientific papers and mystery books, nothing like a short story with a deeper meaning. While I am glad that it helped my writing, I wish that I could’ve been able to develop the story some more to draw readers in. My audience are those who are interested in knowing the difference between how language is taught in Germany and America. I tailored my language to have a more personal touch, to engage better with the reader. I used ethos in my favor by providing links, images and personal anecdotes to prove that I had went there and attended the school. I used pathos in an image to show how I felt about the differences between the education system in Germany and America.

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Digital Receipt #6

Posted by Anniel Buckley (she/her) on

My question is If we give up on trying to catch plagiarism by students how will we separate the students who genuinely work hard from those who lack effort? Also, a lot of students who are just good writers get accused of plagiarism when in reality they just have good writing skills, I know in this day and age technology is a really big thing and advances every day but does that neglect the students who put the time and energy into their work ? 

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